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Comment on Download chapter 1 of “Night without Marie” by Arjan Tupan

Arjan Tupan — Thu, 05 Aug 2010 19:32:36 +0000

Nice Florian. Great way of putting pressure on yourself to continue writing as well. I might copy that idea .

As for the feedback: I really liked the first part of the story. But you could cut back on the curse words a little, for me they don't add too much. And you might mix in a bit more scenic description. For example when he goes to the couch at the end, you could describe a bit the part of the city that is outside the window.

Just my 2 cts. In any case, keep writing.

Comment on Battered, not beaten by Cornelius

Cornelius — Thu, 05 Aug 2010 15:46:23 +0000

Quite an intense and good description of the feeling. I got to know these thoughts just a few weeks ago. Some friends and me were hanging around in the Friedrichshafen Uferpark and realized too late, that the bald group right beside us was a born-and-bred bunch of Neo Nazis. One of their lot shouted something about "Antifa" and instantly we were surrounded and in a pretty one sided fight. Maybe we were too proud to rush off instantly and so most of us kept some bruises as well, luckily nothing too serious. We also called the police the moment we were away and they're still on track of the case, but that can only be some partly satisfaction. It's quite a crappy feeling and I'm still taking Kung Fu lessons to be a little more prepared for the future. Sad but true, that this could happen pretty much anywhere.

Comment on Download chapter 1 of “Night without Marie” by Lene

Lene — Thu, 05 Aug 2010 08:56:03 +0000

nice! gefällt mir gut. wann kommt das nächste kapitel? (so much for peer-pressure

Comment on Download chapter 1 of “Night without Marie” by Ivana Sendecka

Ivana Sendecka — Thu, 05 Aug 2010 04:03:21 +0000

keep on shipping, Florian!;-)

Comment on Battered, not beaten by Brandon

Brandon — Thu, 15 Jul 2010 00:55:14 +0000

Assholes. I always find that forgiveness helps. So lets find them and forgive them until they stop moving.

Comment on Up in the Air – flying in the very first row! by Axel

Axel — Wed, 26 May 2010 21:28:11 +0000

Great! Exciting! Can you please pass my mobile number to Micha so next time I fly with Lufthansa perhaps … ?

Comment on Up in the Air – flying in the very first row! by Davide

Davide — Tue, 25 May 2010 18:51:37 +0000

So. Cool.

So. Envious.

Comment on Starting a trip round Germany by Consulting quitter

Consulting quitter — Sun, 03 Jan 2010 17:16:37 +0000

Funny Twist 4: Simon says: Don’t Write about surprises in your Blog. Bollocks.

Comment on On the way to world fame by andreas

andreas — Mon, 11 Aug 2008 19:38:25 +0000

I truly need to see you in that suit…. gonna have a look tomorrow!
Enjoy overpriced ZÃ¼rich

Comment on “Where the Hell is Matt?” 2008 video is out! by Anja

Anja — Wed, 25 Jun 2008 09:26:45 +0000

That’s really a funny idea to dance around the world… I like it!!